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Steeple those fingers
and pay no heed to the bile and gore
dripping from their posing apex

You are blameless
SO YOU BELIEVE

I stood beside you in an Autumn rainstorm
All those long nights ago
I listened to your overtures of devotion

You smiled at me like it would always matter
I know now, what I was too ignorant to know then
Your smile was a crack in space-time
Your eyes were the bars on my current cage
My heart was your 'Welcome to Hades' mat

Feet tread on
Lives move forward
You became an abstract concept in my muddy mind
I live on, without your poisonous lips
I sustain myself with sheer will,
a will you lost somewhere beside a nameless road in Texas

Time is not amused with your spendthrift insanity
There is no clause for exemption

The time for crying has passed
The time for speculative fictions have passed
The time for wanting what never shall be has PASSED AWAY
The time for bleeding pointlessly for false things has passed
Now is the time for the REAPING!
This was written for someone too stupid to be allowed to breed. As far as my knowledge has shown, they have not done so. Thank DOG.
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musicislove98 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i would love to write something wit you sometime. it just amazes me what you're able to do :)
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OptimalDecay Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Sounds like a plan!
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musicislove98 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
really? :)
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OptimalDecay Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Rocketh on! Yeppers!
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CobaltOfMarch Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
"a will you lost somewhere beside a nameless road in Texas"

There are a few other lines that I like, but this one in particular amazes me. I don't know why, maybe it's the wording, maybe it's the concept, but I really like the way it sounds: it's like everything is explained/concentrated in that single line - just my impression, of course!
Intense poem! I enjoyed reading it :)
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OptimalDecay Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Dankies :)
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